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There's a stunned silence. Task slams her head onto her desk, crushing her hand between the two. Your teacher looks at you unsure exactly what to say in response.
There's a stunned silence. Tash slams her head onto her desk, crushing her hand between the two. The teacher looks at you unsure exactly what to say in response.




"Thomas Morse that is a very personal, and rather a presumptuous question. Now if you can't thinking or a more serious..."
"Thomas Morse that is a very personal, and rather a presumptuous question. Now if you can't think of a more serious..."




"Tom I think you have be more specific." A whisper comes from the desk next to you. You didn't need to look at your sister to know what she's thinking. "Ask her something else, quickly!"
"Tom I think you have be more specific." A whisper comes from the desk next to you. You don't need to look at your sister to know what she's thinking. "Ask her something else, quickly!"




"Err, sorry Miss, I meant..." You pause. If you keep pushing this and it doesn't work, there's no end to how much trouble you would be in! "Do you want to sleep with one of us? Like, do you dream about it? Is it really important to you? Would you give anything to make it happen?"
"Err, sorry Miss, I meant..." You pause. If you keep pushing this and it doesn't work, there's no end to how much trouble you would be in! You're not entirely sure what made you ask that question in the first place. Was it a misplaced curiosity? Or was it really just testing the ring? ''Sure'', you justify to yourself, ''I'm just testing, there's nothing wrong with that.'' "Would y-you...want to sleep...with one of us?" You're still so unsure about what you're asking. This kind of thing isn't like you!




Mouths drop around the classroom as your thoughts explode from your mind to your lips. It isn't until you eventually stop talking that you realise what you've said. Tash freezes, scared motionless of what's about to happen next. Your teacher, on the other hand, seems to just stop talking and fade off. After an agonising few moments, she responds.
Mouths drop around the classroom. Tash freezes, scared motionless of what's about to happen next. Mrs Brans, on the other hand, seems to just stop talking and fade off. After an agonising few moments, she responds; a response no-one expected to hear.




"It's true." She seems more passive than she should be. "It's all true. I had hoped I could suppress it but...how did you know?"
"It's true." She comes across as far more passive about it all than she should. "I've wanted to for a while, but I couldn't do it! I could never...betray any of you like that."




"It's obvious isn't it? Don't you keep flirting with us alllll the time?!" It's almost like you're becoming addicted to the power of the ring! You can hardly stop yourself. You should probably do something before you take it too far, not that you haven't done that already!
As she speaks she seems hurt. Not by you, but by herself. Like she's let herself down. There's definitely a part of you that's intrigued, that wants to find out more. You've pretty much forgotten about the ring, forgotten that you are probably the one who gave her that want in the first place.




WIP
What do you do?:


*[[Yes/Tom & Tash/D-1(B) Br/Push for More|Give in to your intrigue and push for more explanation.]]
*[[Yes/Tom & Tash/D-1(B) Br/Stop Yourself|She's too upset. Cut her some slack and back away.]]
*[[Yes/Tom & Tash/D-1(B) Br/Classmates|''The ring!'' It might be enough for her, but your classmates can make good test subjects.]]
*[[Yes/Tom & Tash/D-1(B) Br/Lunch|Back off and skip to lunch]]


Do you:
<div style="padding: .5em; border: .2em solid black; border-radius: 1em; background-color: rgb(235,235,235);">'''Author's Note:''' I've rewritten this page upon receiving some very useful feedback. The way Tom was in the previous edition just didn't sit right, it didn't fit the character; the more I read it, the more I disliked it. I hope this page reads a little better. If you have any thoughts, on this page or any other, please do leave comments in the related [[Talk:Yes/Tom & Tash/ D-1 (B)/Ask Mrs Brans|Talk/Discussion Page]]. If you like the story, and feel you would like to partcipate, please join in with selecting options to follow (a guide on how to do that is at [[Yes|Yes]])</div>
 
*[[Yes/Tom & Tash/D-1,R,MB(G)(H1)/Give Tash the Ring|Give Tash the ring]]
*[[Yes/Tom & Tash/D-1(B)/Calm Yourself|Calm yourself]]
*[[Yes/Tom & Tash/D-1(B)/Classmates|Turn the ring on Your Classmates]]
*[[Yes/Tom & Tash/D-1(B)/Keep Pushing|See how far you can push this]]
 
<div style="padding: .5em; border: .2em solid black; border-radius: 1em; background-color: rgb(235,235,235);">'''Author's Note:''' After deliberation, I am attempting to write this in Second Peson instead of Third, from last page onwards, telling from the point of view of the person who is currently holding the ring. This means two things:
Please leave feedback in the talk pages about whether you think this works
It will be necessary to make note of who is currently holding the ring, as the story will always be told from that persons point of view. This will be noted at the top of each page. </div>


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Latest revision as of 09:31, 6 February 2017

Current Ring Holder: Thomas (Tom) Morse

"Mrs Brans," you begin as you rack your brain for what to ask, "who do you most want to sleep with in this school?"


There's a stunned silence. Tash slams her head onto her desk, crushing her hand between the two. The teacher looks at you unsure exactly what to say in response.


"Thomas Morse that is a very personal, and rather a presumptuous question. Now if you can't think of a more serious..."


"Tom I think you have be more specific." A whisper comes from the desk next to you. You don't need to look at your sister to know what she's thinking. "Ask her something else, quickly!"


"Err, sorry Miss, I meant..." You pause. If you keep pushing this and it doesn't work, there's no end to how much trouble you would be in! You're not entirely sure what made you ask that question in the first place. Was it a misplaced curiosity? Or was it really just testing the ring? Sure, you justify to yourself, I'm just testing, there's nothing wrong with that. "Would y-you...want to sleep...with one of us?" You're still so unsure about what you're asking. This kind of thing isn't like you!


Mouths drop around the classroom. Tash freezes, scared motionless of what's about to happen next. Mrs Brans, on the other hand, seems to just stop talking and fade off. After an agonising few moments, she responds; a response no-one expected to hear.


"It's true." She comes across as far more passive about it all than she should. "I've wanted to for a while, but I couldn't do it! I could never...betray any of you like that."


As she speaks she seems hurt. Not by you, but by herself. Like she's let herself down. There's definitely a part of you that's intrigued, that wants to find out more. You've pretty much forgotten about the ring, forgotten that you are probably the one who gave her that want in the first place.


What do you do?:

Author's Note: I've rewritten this page upon receiving some very useful feedback. The way Tom was in the previous edition just didn't sit right, it didn't fit the character; the more I read it, the more I disliked it. I hope this page reads a little better. If you have any thoughts, on this page or any other, please do leave comments in the related Talk/Discussion Page. If you like the story, and feel you would like to partcipate, please join in with selecting options to follow (a guide on how to do that is at Yes)