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Created page with "Don't take this the wrong way, but you could really do with making your paragraphs shorter. Big blocks of text are pretty hard to read - you need some white space in there." |
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Don't take this the wrong way, but you could really do with making your paragraphs shorter. Big blocks of text are pretty hard to read - you need some white space in there. | Don't take this the wrong way, but you could really do with making your paragraphs shorter. Big blocks of text are pretty hard to read - you need some white space in there. | ||
It's also a convention to start a new paragraph every time you change speaker when you write dialogue. [[User:Santa|Santa]] ([[User talk:Santa|talk]]) | |||