Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 21th, 2021/Emilia only gets riskier with her markings

Holy shit what can i say this was wow fuck i love this so much and i liek the other option where the mom is slowly controlling her but this one is soooo good too bc of in this one she is just mad at her and want to punish her daughter ahhhh this is so good. and when she grabbed her against the wall so good. about the options you know i want the club so badly... but lets be honest the mom choosing will give the mom permission to draw whatever she wants and more and since it says spade and more that means i could get club too so I'm going for it is too hot and im so interested on that option is too good to not choose it (but if you want somehting else to win do tell ill chnage my vote i love those 2 options but is your story so ill do what you want) --Xephion (talk) 00:46, 26 September 2022 (CEST)

I love that you're taking the story in this direction. Before I stopped writing last year, when I had some stuff between Emilia and Laura fresh in my mind, I kind of imagined her as more encouraging and guiding rather than outright controlling. Yet, here Laura shows such an extremely strict side of her, making it almost feels like she's raising a sex slave at this point rather than a daughter. Meanwhile, Emilia isn't even allowed to see her friends and doesn't even mourn over it even though it's freaking midsummer in Sweden. She just accepts everything, even though "she doesn't like being told what to do". It almost seems to me like she wants it at this point.

In that sense, anything other than a spade would feel like a miss for me here. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 01:21, 26 September 2022 (CEST)