Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 7th, 2020/When Stella met Heidi

I'm pretty much done with the Emilia+Stella stuff for the next page, but not quite there yet with Heidi's shenanigans. Not much I would change here, to be honest, but the timeline is maybe a little sketchy since this time of the year is the start of the summer vacation, and she would still be in and out of the village - on and off - for the next two months or so until the school begins in August. Like, it makes sense for Stella to discover the game early and keep on learning throughout the summer, yes, but it's also kind of hard for me to imagine that Heidi and Stella wouldn't come across each other again through the rest of the summer. We could explain it all by Stella avoiding Heidi on purpose, which would be what I'd probably go with at this point.

Still, all that being said, there should be no conflict, especially if Stella's "skeleton in the closet" moment comes later that summer. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 23:09, 11 October 2022 (CEST)

i love it my only concern is how she finds out about the marks she just went to the gift shop and granny told her im pretty sure this part is strange like is missing more context (unless im the one missing context and granny will openly speaks about the game) because rule 1 of this game is not talk about it im pretty sure no one will just tell her about it like that. i think she should see someone doing it on the way to the gift shop she sees a kid and adult or 2 kids doing it and then she gets curious about it and maybe overhear granny talking about it and then she gets the pamphlet and all that stuff. (im not saying to write all of this it can be vague like the it is already BUT i do feel maybe to put something indicating that she saw it before talking to granny and that she ask granny about it) --Xephion (talk) 06:29, 12 October 2022 (CEST)