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I feel like Emilia agreed too quickly. Like, she asks her mom, ''"But why would you want that?! Why would you want me to lose my friends?"'' but what about what Emilia wants? Would SHE seriously be okay with losing her friends? Even if she wants to be a slave, I find it difficult to imagine she would be willing to even risk her friendships for that. I think she should hesitate more, even if she doesn't end up admitting it to her mom. Not sure what you have planned for the next page, but that hesitation could even come into play, and an option where Emilia's friend(s) figure out what's going on would be interesting. Who knows, they could have even been spying, and know what's going on. Emilia's been grounded for a week with zero or minimal contact to them, so who knows? Anyway, just my two cents. I'm probably the only person on this whole site who thinks Emilia should push back and feel more reluctant, so feel free to ignore my whole post if it doesn't fit your plans.
My honest opinion this was hot i love it Emilia wants it sooo badly but her mom knows that she cant give it to her becuase this is a commitment for live. im not a big fan of involving the friends in this branch but im eager to see what comes next great work as always --[[User:Xephion|Xephion]] ([[User talk:Xephion|talk]]) 11:45, 30 November 2022 (CET)


Oh, and a kayfabe response from me to Laura saying: ''"They've been playing this game for some time. All of their bravado and sass and confidence comes from those marks. But take that away and what are they? No different than any other young girl, I'm sure."'' Oh, it's funny how badly you underestimates them and the kinds of girls they are... 😉 -- [[User:Innocent Ruin|Innocent Ruin]] ([[User talk:Innocent Ruin|talk]]) 00:15, 27 November 2022 (CET)
It's technically not a life-long commitment, as it's all just a game in the end. Emilia can just take the mark off at any time, flip the bird to Laura, and refuse to be a slave, and if she ever does, there's nothing Laura can do according to the rules. (Or, if Laura tries, she would have to do it outside the "game", but that would kind of invalidate the whole premise of this story, being about that very "game".) But still, I get what you mean. Laura and Emilia should ''both'' tread very lightly. Forget about Emilia ruining her friendship with Heidi and Milka, this could ruin their mother-and-daughter relationship too. -- [[User:Innocent Ruin|Innocent Ruin]] ([[User talk:Innocent Ruin|talk]]) 16:17, 30 November 2022 (CET)

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My honest opinion this was hot i love it Emilia wants it sooo badly but her mom knows that she cant give it to her becuase this is a commitment for live. im not a big fan of involving the friends in this branch but im eager to see what comes next great work as always --Xephion (talk) 11:45, 30 November 2022 (CET)

It's technically not a life-long commitment, as it's all just a game in the end. Emilia can just take the mark off at any time, flip the bird to Laura, and refuse to be a slave, and if she ever does, there's nothing Laura can do according to the rules. (Or, if Laura tries, she would have to do it outside the "game", but that would kind of invalidate the whole premise of this story, being about that very "game".) But still, I get what you mean. Laura and Emilia should both tread very lightly. Forget about Emilia ruining her friendship with Heidi and Milka, this could ruin their mother-and-daughter relationship too. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 16:17, 30 November 2022 (CET)

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