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I've also tossed around the idea that Penny is left at "Santa's" old family's house, along with a giant wooden box. When the family wakes up, Penny explains that "although some of you are on the naughty list this year, Santa is in a jovial mood. Next year, Santa won't be so kind and if you're on the naughty list, "he" (referencing the box) will punish you."  Box opens and reveals Krampus "''Guten morgen.''" I guess Penny could also deliver letters from their deceased relative (who's now Santa)
I've also tossed around the idea that Penny is left at "Santa's" old family's house, along with a giant wooden box. When the family wakes up, Penny explains that "although some of you are on the naughty list this year, Santa is in a jovial mood. Next year, Santa won't be so kind and if you're on the naughty list, "he" (referencing the box) will punish you."  Box opens and reveals Krampus "''Guten morgen.''" I guess Penny could also deliver letters from their deceased relative (who's now Santa)
--[[User:MrPib|MrPib]] ([[User talk:MrPib|talk]]) 19:22, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
--[[User:MrPib|MrPib]] ([[User talk:MrPib|talk]]) 19:22, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
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Suggestions like these are what PIP is all about now; so thank you for that.  I have left Krampus' powers intentionally vague so far, so . . . yes, he can certainly shape-shift (as of now).  Before he leaves his own workshop though, he probably needs to let the elves know the changes that he would like to make.
Randal's family is probably going to be dealt with entirely in the [[PIP/Santa|Santa]] branch of [[PIP]]; but I'll try to keep them in mind for once I have finished writing the Krampus events from Santa's perspective.  To tell the truth, I am personally more interested in writing for Santa right now than Krampus (I like writing about reward ''much'' more than punishment . . . and actually find BDSM and everything but the most mild sexual violence to be a total turn-off).  I did want a story about Krampus to exist in parallel to my story about Santa (crossing over from time to time) . . . but I was kinda hoping someone else would take an interest and want to run with it.  Since this is what you are making suggestions on, however, that is where my priority will be.
--[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 15:35, 2 December 2019 (UTC)
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Yeah, I'm not a fan of Hurtcore, guro/gore, torture, or snuff regarding children; adults, I'm fine with torture and only if they truly deserve it.
You don't have to go the "extreme sexual violence" route simply because that's what got the old Krampus killed; and James would be nicer. The farthest I'd see James going, is getting those "hoods" and using magic to temporarily turn them into girls and fucking them; then returning them to normal and sending them home.
Take your time, write what ''you'' want to write....
Also, will Krampus be going out for Krampusnacht-Nikolaustag (midnight Dec 5-6. Dec 6 is also the Catholic holiday for the patron Saint Nicholas) or are you just sticking with Christmas Eve? --[[User:MrPib|MrPib]] ([[User talk:MrPib|talk]]) 19:35, 2 December 2019 (UTC)
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Without feedback, I tend to stagnate more quickly, so I tend to work on the stuff I get feedback for even if it isn't exactly my cup of tea.
I kind of remember the other holidays, but I planned on having most of the action on Christmas Eve.  That isn't to say that they don't do things ''before'' Christmas Eve; just that it is going to be the meatiest part of their stories.  Santa really doesn't have much to do until Christmas after all . . . and Krampus shouldn't take nearly a whole month to remake the workshop.  --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 15:36, 3 December 2019 (UTC)

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I thought I'd have the creation of the new Krampus done in one page, but it was getting too long, so this page will wrap things up when I get around to it. --Elerneron (talk) 07:39, 21 November 2019 (UTC)

Lol, didn't see this one in the recents XD. yeah that works --MrPib (talk) 02:51, 24 November 2019 (UTC)


Would Krampus ask the elves if his presence bothers them and leave his workshop?

Does Krampus have the ability to shape shift? I could see it being used to transform into a family member of the kid he's punishing.

Shape shift back to human self (add small horns), then go look for the "Cute elf" (Penny).

I've also tossed around the idea that Penny is left at "Santa's" old family's house, along with a giant wooden box. When the family wakes up, Penny explains that "although some of you are on the naughty list this year, Santa is in a jovial mood. Next year, Santa won't be so kind and if you're on the naughty list, "he" (referencing the box) will punish you." Box opens and reveals Krampus "Guten morgen." I guess Penny could also deliver letters from their deceased relative (who's now Santa) --MrPib (talk) 19:22, 1 December 2019 (UTC)


Suggestions like these are what PIP is all about now; so thank you for that. I have left Krampus' powers intentionally vague so far, so . . . yes, he can certainly shape-shift (as of now). Before he leaves his own workshop though, he probably needs to let the elves know the changes that he would like to make.

Randal's family is probably going to be dealt with entirely in the Santa branch of PIP; but I'll try to keep them in mind for once I have finished writing the Krampus events from Santa's perspective. To tell the truth, I am personally more interested in writing for Santa right now than Krampus (I like writing about reward much more than punishment . . . and actually find BDSM and everything but the most mild sexual violence to be a total turn-off). I did want a story about Krampus to exist in parallel to my story about Santa (crossing over from time to time) . . . but I was kinda hoping someone else would take an interest and want to run with it. Since this is what you are making suggestions on, however, that is where my priority will be.

--Elerneron (talk) 15:35, 2 December 2019 (UTC)


Yeah, I'm not a fan of Hurtcore, guro/gore, torture, or snuff regarding children; adults, I'm fine with torture and only if they truly deserve it.

You don't have to go the "extreme sexual violence" route simply because that's what got the old Krampus killed; and James would be nicer. The farthest I'd see James going, is getting those "hoods" and using magic to temporarily turn them into girls and fucking them; then returning them to normal and sending them home.

Take your time, write what you want to write....

Also, will Krampus be going out for Krampusnacht-Nikolaustag (midnight Dec 5-6. Dec 6 is also the Catholic holiday for the patron Saint Nicholas) or are you just sticking with Christmas Eve? --MrPib (talk) 19:35, 2 December 2019 (UTC)


Without feedback, I tend to stagnate more quickly, so I tend to work on the stuff I get feedback for even if it isn't exactly my cup of tea.

I kind of remember the other holidays, but I planned on having most of the action on Christmas Eve. That isn't to say that they don't do things before Christmas Eve; just that it is going to be the meatiest part of their stories. Santa really doesn't have much to do until Christmas after all . . . and Krampus shouldn't take nearly a whole month to remake the workshop. --Elerneron (talk) 15:36, 3 December 2019 (UTC)