Talk:Manufactured Misfortune/The next day

I'm leaning toward the cheerleader (seems easiest with the whole tutor thing), and the Drama club girl (they're all about the spotlight, even with the nerves, so nudity seems a perfectly normal step). Doesn't mean she doesn't have better ones prepared, though. If you don't have another group, or don't want to do another group, go with the cheerleader. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 04:32, 29 February 2020 (CET)

Keep in mind that while the exhibitionism comment from the first chapter may seem like it suggests the girls will knowingly get naked, it actually is meant to explain why the girls are dressed certain ways (no bra/panties, partially unbuttoned shirt, etc.) and how X could talk them into certain scenarios for Y to exploit. This story is based on the whole "stealth stripping" idea that I've grown to like, so the girls shouldn't know what the MC is doing. Now if others notice, or she discovers her nudity in an embarrassing way, well, that will have to wait to be seen. And to be honest I was just planning on rolling a die or something for which girl to pick, but if cheerleader is your request I'll happily oblige. --NoGo45 (talk) 05:20, 29 February 2020 (CET)

Just about every American male has a thing for cheerleaders. That and I like short girls. She could have smaller breasts and I would find her hotter, but this will work. Also the tutor thing is the easiest "in" out of the group. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 05:37, 29 February 2020 (CET)

Oddly enough I don't care for cheerleaders that much, they always seem to skinny for my liking and all the make up they wear is a turn off for me. Now fictional cheerleaders, who can have a wider range of body shapes aside from "thin noodle," that's more my style. --NoGo45 (talk) 05:55, 29 February 2020 (CET)

Oh, and believe it or not I make most of this stuff up on the spot and really struggled with writing up those girls aside from the track girl, so I'll start another one's path but, as always, feel free to offer suggestions. --NoGo45 (talk) 05:58, 29 February 2020 (CET)

They seem fairly random to me. Only thing to be mindful of is breast size (and maybe height, though as I said, I like 'em short). Remember it's high school, so they vary greatly. I went to a small town school, so they were limited in their cheerleader choices so quite a few of ours weren't "sticks". I agree with the makeup, although that's not limited to cheerleaders when girls are that young lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 06:27, 29 February 2020 (CET)

Now that I've thought about it for a bit, perhaps it would be better to have options where the girl is aware of her nudity. After all the goal is for the MC to not get caught, so as long as they don't suspect him things should be fine. And this way I don't write myself into a corner by eliminating my options. --NoGo45 (talk) 14:45, 29 February 2020 (CET)

You haven't worked on this one in a while. I look forward to the naked fun to be had. You mentioned int he previous talk comment about having options where they are aware of their nudity, as long as he didn't get caught. Is the goal to get them naked in public, or just get them naked? It might work if they willingly show him some skin (and wind up going much further than they intended). --Notsooldpervert (talk) 19:55, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

I do intend on working on this story someday soon, it's just that I feel the current path spiraled a little out of control with the sister and gym teacher, makes my mind grind to a halt thinking about continuing it. That and I'm terrible at focusing on writing lol. And the goal of the girls is to get them naked, doesn't matter the circumstances so long as Ron doesn't get caught, so location and privacy are secondary concerns, although less people will make it a bit more easier. As for showing some skin, I got a few ideas for that in mind, like Addison sunbathing while Ron tutors her, lying on her stomach leaving the knot for her top vulnerable... you get the idea. --NoGo45 (talk) 21:55, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

I think I might go through and use the options skipping all the extra content to focus on Addison (or another girl), then later I can go back to flesh out the "side quests" and reconnect them to the main story. --NoGo45 (talk) 22:02, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

Yeah, if that's the roadblock, I was going to suggest back up and punt. Maybe leave the gym class (since I really like the exhibitionist sister angle), but take a different path so the teacher isn't involved. Or maybe she noticed what was going on, but lives vicariously and won't tell or something? What's the end goal? If the start is exposing them without him being blamed for it, what constitutes a "win" and move on to the next girl? Getting them to expose themselves willingly? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 22:25, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

I never really had a clear end goal in mind; I like these types of stories to be open ended, appearing endless even though they obviously wont go on forever. The idea is to just find various ways to undress a girl in various different situations, and have Ron and whatever girl he chose grow closer and maybe start dating, but still have the focus being on stealth stripping. And if they start dating then Ron could try sweet talking them into willingly exposing themselves.

If I had to pick an idea for a "win" scenario, I suppose one possibility could be a pièce de résistance of sorts, like exposing her in front of the whole school, a stadium full of people, on stage, etc, ending with X and Ron celebrating a job well done; while another could be Ron spilling the beans to the focus girl (once they're close enough to where she wont be mad at him) and then the two turn the tables on X, but that would take away a lot of the mystery by revealing who she is for any other paths not yet started/created. --NoGo45 (talk) 22:55, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

Maybe they have different goals? Ron is decides he likes one of the girls enough to date them, while X is looking for as much nudity/sex as possible. If he settles on a single girl, maybe he comes clean with her, but instead of being mad they become exhibitionists for X, where she gives them scenarios they play out like road head, or masturbating each other in a theater. She keeps talking them into more and more since they get off on it too, and it's hard for them to resist. They have sex and X insists on no condoms, then starts to insist on showing off the creampie afterward, then having sex in front of someone (Emily?). Of course, before that, he gets lots of girls naked before settling down lol. He should test things too, like going naked in different rooms to see what selfie he gets in response, and when he finds the rooms where she sees what happens, jack off to her selfies or something. He's told her that his sister is off limits for her game, but that doesn't mean she can't encourage him saying how hot it is and egging him on to try as much as Emily will allow. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 23:44, 24 October 2020 (UTC)