Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 19th, 2021/Trip to Trolleby/Stella is going to use every single weapon in her arsenal to "torture" Emilia: Difference between revisions
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Im surprised no one is talking about this page this was hot really good stuff this was hardcore but light, Heidi getting there at the end is perfect and Stella talking to the dad hilarious now he is not only confused but worry lol great work man love the whole page, now the options i mean both get to the same point the difference is that in one Emilia gets more controlled and in the other Heidi gets more controlled but lets be honest considering she did use a black star i think the most reasonable result would be Heidi punishing Emilia so that's were my vote is going for. --[[User:Xephion|Xephion]] ([[User talk:Xephion|talk]]) 04:49, 19 October 2022 (CEST) | Im surprised no one is talking about this page this was hot really good stuff this was hardcore but light, Heidi getting there at the end is perfect and Stella talking to the dad hilarious now he is not only confused but worry lol great work man love the whole page, now the options i mean both get to the same point the difference is that in one Emilia gets more controlled and in the other Heidi gets more controlled but lets be honest considering she did use a black star i think the most reasonable result would be Heidi punishing Emilia so that's were my vote is going for. --[[User:Xephion|Xephion]] ([[User talk:Xephion|talk]]) 04:49, 19 October 2022 (CEST) | ||
The only thing better than Heidi and Stella ganging up on Emilia would be Heidi jumping Stella and the two of them "forgetting" Emilia while the poor girl is filled full of vibes. That would be fun! --[[User:Villenia|Villenia]] ([[User talk:Villenia|talk]]) 05:39, 19 October 2022 (CEST) | |||
Actually, Xephion, the two options get to kind of different ends. Heidi will wrestle control to herself in both, the only question is, who her target and her "tag team partner" is. As for Villenia's idea, I didn't even think of it. I guess I could still play around with that idea a little regardless of which path is chosen, as I haven't begun writing yet. -- [[User:Innocent Ruin|Innocent Ruin]] ([[User talk:Innocent Ruin|talk]]) 07:55, 19 October 2022 (CEST) | |||
Two black stars! Two black stars! lol | |||
It's good to see in Heidi's head here though because it felt like she flipped really quick before, so that bit of exposition was welcome. --[[User:Villenia|Villenia]] ([[User talk:Villenia|talk]]) 20:25, 20 October 2022 (CEST) | |||
That thought bubble was originally meant for next page, but I thought I'd be better fit here. Two blacks is a fun idea for a third option, but at this point I want to wrap this up and move on to the next day. I'd have to rewrite quite a lot of content to make that fit for what I currently have sadly. I will try to write the aftermath in a way that will allow for an eventual re-encounter, which will make Stella and Heidi even hungrier for each other. -- [[User:Innocent Ruin|Innocent Ruin]] ([[User talk:Innocent Ruin|talk]]) 12:03, 21 October 2022 (CEST) | |||
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Im surprised no one is talking about this page this was hot really good stuff this was hardcore but light, Heidi getting there at the end is perfect and Stella talking to the dad hilarious now he is not only confused but worry lol great work man love the whole page, now the options i mean both get to the same point the difference is that in one Emilia gets more controlled and in the other Heidi gets more controlled but lets be honest considering she did use a black star i think the most reasonable result would be Heidi punishing Emilia so that's were my vote is going for. --Xephion (talk) 04:49, 19 October 2022 (CEST)
The only thing better than Heidi and Stella ganging up on Emilia would be Heidi jumping Stella and the two of them "forgetting" Emilia while the poor girl is filled full of vibes. That would be fun! --Villenia (talk) 05:39, 19 October 2022 (CEST)
Actually, Xephion, the two options get to kind of different ends. Heidi will wrestle control to herself in both, the only question is, who her target and her "tag team partner" is. As for Villenia's idea, I didn't even think of it. I guess I could still play around with that idea a little regardless of which path is chosen, as I haven't begun writing yet. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 07:55, 19 October 2022 (CEST)
Two black stars! Two black stars! lol
It's good to see in Heidi's head here though because it felt like she flipped really quick before, so that bit of exposition was welcome. --Villenia (talk) 20:25, 20 October 2022 (CEST)
That thought bubble was originally meant for next page, but I thought I'd be better fit here. Two blacks is a fun idea for a third option, but at this point I want to wrap this up and move on to the next day. I'd have to rewrite quite a lot of content to make that fit for what I currently have sadly. I will try to write the aftermath in a way that will allow for an eventual re-encounter, which will make Stella and Heidi even hungrier for each other. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 12:03, 21 October 2022 (CEST)