Talk:The Last Horcrux/Diagon Alley

No sex for a little while my dear readers. First, Emily needs to prepare for Hogwarts. Don’t worry though, once she gets to Hogwarts and meets the other girls there she will have lots of lesbian sex.

If you care to, please leave me some feedback here on what you think so far and anything you might like Emily to do later in the story. She won’t do any hetero sex, but some of the other characters might. Emily (talk) 23:54, 24 January 2023 (CET)

I did a lot of fixing and image uploading. I hope the story looks better now. I would greatly appreciate any feedback from people who have read it so far. I want to get to the sexy parts too but have got to set the scene. When Emily gets to Hogwarts and meets other witches it will be very fun. Emily (talk) 23:41, 27 January 2023 (CET)

I know you said Emily won't do hetero, but would Voldemort? ("Emily" drinks a polyjuice potion with a boy's hair and fucks a girl.) I know that Voldemort wouldn't be on the receiving end as he's probably not gay but who's to say that he doesn't have fun? This would appear that Emily is a Dom.

Regarding Diagonal Alley,

there's a possibility that the wand that Olivander gives "Emily" won't work for actual Emily. Since this is an alternate timeline, there might be "triplet" wands that are 13½ inches, made of Yew and have a phoenix feather core. (Voldemort and Harry have twin wands.)

There's a chance that the wand wouldn't work for Emily, unless forcefully taken, once Voldemort finds a new body.

Then there's the issue within the depths of Gringotts, there's the waterfall that negates magic. There's a chance that it messes up the possession and it's best if someone else retrieves the funds from the Lestrange vault.

Regarding robes, Voldemort may steer towards Madam Malkin’s out of habit from memory but Emily would probably interfere and steer them towards Twilfitt and Tattings, which is more luxurious and tends to only serve Purebloods.

--MrPib (talk) 00:22, 28 January 2023 (CET)

• Thanks for the feedback Mr Pib. On wands it’s a bit tricky. Emily needed a wand quickly so found her mother’s wand. It’s said the wand picks the wizard, so in this case I’m thinking that her mother’s wand actually wants to help Emily and Voldemort. They won’t know this for sure until they check with Ollivander.

• Emily is definitely going to T&Ts to get her clothing. My sense is that she would have gone there anyway. She is after enchanted clothing in particular so this is a requirement for her.

• On the waterfall in Gringotts - this is something I had forgotten about. Did Harry go through it at any point in the books? My sense is that it wouldn’t dislodge the possession but would strip Emily of her defensive enchantments which is something she wouldn’t want to happen, given that the Ministry would be able to detect her recasting them (at least the Psyche Obfuscatem again). She will already have to deal with the consequences of that later.

• on hetero sex. I’m probably not as good at writing it and it’s not really my thing, but it has occurred to me that later on, Voldemort may want a male body or could use polyjuice potion. Most of the girls at Hogwarts will be straight and Emily can’t reasonably seduce them all (without things like love potions and Imperious curses, which she will happily use). There will be other perverts at Hogwarts too though so there might be some m/f m/g and teen straight sex which I know most people here like. I have an idea of Emily finding a straight teenage couple fucking in a secret part of Hogwarts and blackmailing them, as well as making them have sex in front of her while she masturbated watching the girl. It will be very naughty. Emily (talk) 12:24, 28 January 2023 (CET)

The Thief's Downfall removes everything (polyjuice, imperius, the charms on the minecarts, etc), except the effects of the Invisibility Cloak (it's a Deathly Hallow) and undetectable spells (undetectable extension charm for example)

Another thing occured to me, in this timeline is Snape the Head of Slytherin and is he a spy for Dumbledore? Voldemort may try to kill him again and Emily, with access to Voldemort's memories of Snape's murder, might seek Snape's help when she gains control.

I'm waiting to see how you take this timeline. --MrPib (talk) 19:09, 28 January 2023 (CET)

• I’ll have to think about the Gringott’s Bank then. I’m also using the wiki but it’s been a little while since I’ve read the books. The idea of the separate timelines is to a) prevent temporal paradoxes, b) prevent Voldemort knowing everything in advance and c) prevent the reader from getting bored at things being too similar and predictable. The timeline the Voldemort possessing Emily came from might not be identical to the books either. It also enables me to mess things up a little bit.

• Given that you’re a fellow HP fan, if you have any suggestions for future plot ideas, feel free to add them here or on my talk page to alert me. E.g. of you want Emily to lure a particular girl in to naughtiness for example. Emily (talk) 22:59, 28 January 2023 (CET)