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[[User:Emily|Emily]] ([[User talk:Emily|talk]]) 14:06, 23 February 2023 (UTC)
[[User:Emily|Emily]] ([[User talk:Emily|talk]]) 14:06, 23 February 2023 (UTC)
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I forgot to mention this earlier but now that the train is coming up in the story:
* Rowling doesn't use proper Latin for spells, ''in her universe at least''. It's entirely possible that, in the universe of this story, they do use proper Latin. (It seems that you're introducing some of your own homebrewed spells anyways)
** It bugged me that ''Oculus Reparō'' actually refers to "fix eyesight" (repair/renew eyes) and not "repair glasses" (Ocularia Reparō)
*** I used ''ocularia'' in place of ''specula'' to prevent confusion (glass is "speculum" in Latin)
Also, you may want to have a look at [https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3360217 this]page, in order to get an idea of who all are first years. (Names and general appearance.) Take note however, that the Patil's are identical twins but with different hair styles. Also, Ms. MacDougal and Ms. Bones swapped hair colors in the first two movies. (Chris Columbus' daughter portrayed Susan Bones)
--[[User:MrPib|MrPib]] ([[User talk:MrPib|talk]]) 07:27, 24 February 2023 (UTC)
I’m just using my memory and Google translate for my Latin spell inventions, so they won’t be perfect either, although I’m trying to be consistent. 
I’m aware of most of the first years but the picture with their hair colour and appearance is helpful.
There will be at least one new original character in addition to Emily starting the school, but the rest will be almost the same as the books
[[User:Emily|Emily]] ([[User talk:Emily|talk]]) 10:55, 24 February 2023 (UTC)

Latest revision as of 10:55, 24 February 2023

Might I suggest some ideas for some Hogwarts escapades?


  • Fun with Susan Bones. Voldemort killed most of her family for working in the ministry; befriending a "Bones" now would be beneficial.
    • Maybe her aunt, Amelia, was a part of Sofia's coven in this timeline. (Possible scene involving Amelia Bones and Bella, "initiating" Emily and Susan into the coven.)


  • Ghost sex. While Myrtle isn't my type, maybe there's a reason they call her "Moaning" Myrtle. She could've died while masturbating.
    • She mentions "There's rumors of a book that contains a spell that lets you fuck ghosts" but she's unsure if it's in the school library, or if the last known person to read the book (I think her name was Sofia) even returned it to the library.
  • Helena Ravenclaw: she'll tell you where the Diadem is, if you can figure out a way to fuck her. After fucking her, she reveals that she made the same deal with a student named Tom Riddle; she shouldn't have told him where to find the Diadem, until after he fucked her. (She's been upset this whole time, not only did she lose the Diadem, but she's been dying to get fucked.)


  • While not sexual, I'd like to see a scene of a bunch of older Slytherin students bullying Winky, the free House Elf, and have Emily come to the rescue. She's befriended Servus and she misses him.

--MrPib (talk) 20:37, 22 February 2023 (UTC)

  • It’s actually going to take a surprising turn from the moment she gets on the train, up until the point where the troll turns up and tries to get Hermione. I’d tell you but it would spoil things
  • Emily will get up to all kinds of naughty mischief. She already knows Pansy and Daphne and Lavender Brown as they are all pure bloods. She will meet Hermione top of course as well as other first year and older girls
  • Her holiday in Paris with Bellatrix and the French Lestranges at Christmas will be truly deviant. I’m excited just thinking about writing that part
  • the similarities and differences between the original HP timeline, this fragment of Voldemorts soul timeline and Emily’s timeline will gradually become more apparent, but it will be broadly similar to start out

Feel free to keep suggesting ideas, I will include them if I like them. I am going to add the option to use the Guardian Statue in the inventory from tonight or later this week

Emily (talk) 14:06, 23 February 2023 (UTC)


I forgot to mention this earlier but now that the train is coming up in the story:

  • Rowling doesn't use proper Latin for spells, in her universe at least. It's entirely possible that, in the universe of this story, they do use proper Latin. (It seems that you're introducing some of your own homebrewed spells anyways)
    • It bugged me that Oculus Reparō actually refers to "fix eyesight" (repair/renew eyes) and not "repair glasses" (Ocularia Reparō)
      • I used ocularia in place of specula to prevent confusion (glass is "speculum" in Latin)


Also, you may want to have a look at thispage, in order to get an idea of who all are first years. (Names and general appearance.) Take note however, that the Patil's are identical twins but with different hair styles. Also, Ms. MacDougal and Ms. Bones swapped hair colors in the first two movies. (Chris Columbus' daughter portrayed Susan Bones)


--MrPib (talk) 07:27, 24 February 2023 (UTC)

I’m just using my memory and Google translate for my Latin spell inventions, so they won’t be perfect either, although I’m trying to be consistent.

I’m aware of most of the first years but the picture with their hair colour and appearance is helpful.

There will be at least one new original character in addition to Emily starting the school, but the rest will be almost the same as the books

Emily (talk) 10:55, 24 February 2023 (UTC)