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Okay, so I'm in a bit of a pickle regarding Bayley. | Okay, so I'm in a bit of a pickle regarding Bayley. | ||
In the orignal story (https://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Three_Sisters:_Remastered), she was first written by tapdancingfish as a hyperactive and naive 10 YO girl with a bit of a motor mouth (And frankly, not much of a personality). Then the original site owner banned underage sex on the site, but by then the original author had long since vanished, leaving me to make a few hasty changes to character's ages in order to keep the story from getting axed. Then when I began reworking the idea into 7 Days of Incest, I aged Bayley up to 18 on CHYOA (cause they ALSO ban underage sex), and took advantage of that to give Bayley a bit more personality and make her a tad more interesting. | In the orignal story (https://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Three_Sisters:_Remastered), she was first written by tapdancingfish as a hyperactive and naive 10 YO girl with a bit of a motor mouth (And frankly, not much of a personality). Then the original site owner banned underage sex on the site, but by then the original author had long since vanished, leaving me to make a few hasty changes to character's ages in order to keep the story from getting axed. Then when I began reworking the idea into the first version of 7 Days of Incest (https://chyoa.com/story/7-Days-of-Incest.22394), I aged Bayley up to 18 on CHYOA (cause they ALSO ban underage sex), and took advantage of that to give Bayley a bit more personality and make her a tad more interesting. | ||
Now that I started working on the story here though, I can actually have the characters be closer to the ages they were originally supposed to be. Which means that the personality I gave Age18!Bayley probably is in the trash can and I have to start almost from scratch all over again. Any ideas? | Now that I started working on the story here though, I can actually have the characters be closer to the ages they were originally supposed to be. Which means that the personality I gave Age18!Bayley probably is in the trash can and I have to start almost from scratch all over again. Any ideas? You guys know how to write children better than I do. | ||
--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] ([[User talk:Durzan|talk]]) 08:52, 15 September 2024 (UTC) | --[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] ([[User talk:Durzan|talk]]) 08:52, 15 September 2024 (UTC) | ||
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Alrighty, I'm always open for ideas and suggestions, so fire away! --Durzan (talk) 22:56, 25 February 2024 (UTC)
Bayley
Okay, so I'm in a bit of a pickle regarding Bayley.
In the orignal story (https://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Three_Sisters:_Remastered), she was first written by tapdancingfish as a hyperactive and naive 10 YO girl with a bit of a motor mouth (And frankly, not much of a personality). Then the original site owner banned underage sex on the site, but by then the original author had long since vanished, leaving me to make a few hasty changes to character's ages in order to keep the story from getting axed. Then when I began reworking the idea into the first version of 7 Days of Incest (https://chyoa.com/story/7-Days-of-Incest.22394), I aged Bayley up to 18 on CHYOA (cause they ALSO ban underage sex), and took advantage of that to give Bayley a bit more personality and make her a tad more interesting.
Now that I started working on the story here though, I can actually have the characters be closer to the ages they were originally supposed to be. Which means that the personality I gave Age18!Bayley probably is in the trash can and I have to start almost from scratch all over again. Any ideas? You guys know how to write children better than I do. --Durzan (talk) 08:52, 15 September 2024 (UTC)