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Don't take this the wrong way, but you could really do with making your paragraphs shorter. Big blocks of text are pretty hard to read - you need some white space in there.
Don't take this the wrong way, but you could really do with making your paragraphs shorter. Big blocks of text are pretty hard to read - you need some white space in there.


It's also a convention to start a new paragraph every time you change speaker when you write dialogue.
It's also a convention to start a new paragraph every time you change speaker when you write dialogue. [[User:Santa|Santa]] ([[User talk:Santa|talk]])

Latest revision as of 21:43, 29 December 2019

Don't take this the wrong way, but you could really do with making your paragraphs shorter. Big blocks of text are pretty hard to read - you need some white space in there.

It's also a convention to start a new paragraph every time you change speaker when you write dialogue. Santa (talk)

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