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This whole story is incredible! To the author: did you draw all the art yourself? It's pretty detailed with the expressions and clothing changes too. --[[User:Green|Green]] ([[User talk:Green|talk]]) 02:16, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
This whole story is incredible! To the author: did you draw all the art yourself? It's pretty detailed with the expressions and clothing changes too. --[[User:Green|Green]] ([[User talk:Green|talk]]) 02:16, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
Fun idea: Laura calls Emilia to warn her but isn't direct, tries to tell her "those girls are going to get you into trouble" and Emilia doesn't listen. When Laura shows up with Daniel, Emilia is nearly scared straight, except she breaks the rules trying to protect her friends and gets punished for it. If you leave a branch to something like this available I'd be willing to write it myself. --[[User:Villenia|Villenia]] ([[User talk:Villenia|talk]]) 05:09, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

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This whole story is incredible! To the author: did you draw all the art yourself? It's pretty detailed with the expressions and clothing changes too. --Green (talk) 02:16, 10 September 2021 (UTC)


Fun idea: Laura calls Emilia to warn her but isn't direct, tries to tell her "those girls are going to get you into trouble" and Emilia doesn't listen. When Laura shows up with Daniel, Emilia is nearly scared straight, except she breaks the rules trying to protect her friends and gets punished for it. If you leave a branch to something like this available I'd be willing to write it myself. --Villenia (talk) 05:09, 10 September 2021 (UTC)