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She didn't seem to notice, or if she did, she didn't care, she didn't want me to die, so '''he''' hugged me tight and didn't let go. | She didn't seem to notice, or if she did, she didn't care, she didn't want me to die, so '''he''' hugged me tight and didn't let go. | ||
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Thanks unknown person --[[User:PrincessKittens|PrincessKittens]] ([[User talk:PrincessKittens|talk]]) 07:27, 1 March 2022 (CET) | Thanks unknown person --[[User:PrincessKittens|PrincessKittens]] ([[User talk:PrincessKittens|talk]]) 07:27, 1 March 2022 (CET) | ||
Latest revision as of 20:08, 1 March 2022
Typo in TDTL1 in the 9th paragraph second sentence: you used "he" instead of "she" when talking about Kate hugging her dad.
She didn't seem to notice, or if she did, she didn't care, she didn't want me to die, so he hugged me tight and didn't let go.
Sorry new to the site, I assumed my signature would be included by default User:PerfectlyNormalPerson great story by the way hope you keep working on it
Thanks unknown person --PrincessKittens (talk) 07:27, 1 March 2022 (CET)