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It looks good, thank you! One of my main struggles with writing is keeping it clear; you improved it. Also added some nice details! --[[User:Fish|Fish]] ([[User talk:Fish|talk]]) 18:46, 3 July 2023 (UTC) | It looks good, thank you! One of my main struggles with writing is keeping it clear; you improved it. Also added some nice details! --[[User:Fish|Fish]] ([[User talk:Fish|talk]]) 18:46, 3 July 2023 (UTC) | ||
I like the way it's going. Where does she go from here though? --[[User:Hope|Hope]] ([[User talk:Hope|talk]]) 07:46, 12 July 2023 (UTC) | |||
Latest revision as of 07:46, 12 July 2023
I hope you like my edit. If you don't, it can all be reverted back. --Hope (talk) 13:25, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
It looks good, thank you! One of my main struggles with writing is keeping it clear; you improved it. Also added some nice details! --Fish (talk) 18:46, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
I like the way it's going. Where does she go from here though? --Hope (talk) 07:46, 12 July 2023 (UTC)