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Here I have added a penultimate passage that I felt was missing from the version submitted to the writing contest.<br>
Here I have added a penultimate passage that I felt was missing from the version submitted to the writing contest.<br>
[https://allthefallen.moe/forum/index.php?threads/angel-m-g-contest.52886/#post-20584565 Here] is a link to the original text and the feedback it got on ATF forum.
[https://allthefallen.moe/forum/index.php?threads/angel-m-g-contest.52886/#post-20584565 Here] is a link to the original text and the feedback it got on ATF forum.




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This one did even worse in the competition, but I got carried away enough to write a lot.<br>
This one did even worse in the competition, but I got carried away enough to write a lot.<br>
13 chapters and a short epiloque.<br>
13 chapters and a short epiloque.<br>




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My entry to writing contest "Sexual Education"<br>
My entry to writing contest "Sexual Education"<br>
[[Supplementary Education]]<br>
<small>Math lesson for 3rd grader Paige</small><br>
Ispired by writing contest "Sexual Education"<br>





Revision as of 17:45, 11 May 2024

I am not a native English speaker. I hope the unnatural use of language works to add flavor to my texts, but of course I try my best to make it flow.


Kids
A man's encounters with preteen prostitutes
4 chapters.
M/g, M/b, M/gg, g/M, b/M
The first story I have finished.The chapters are somewhat self-contained.


Possession
First-grader Ellie accidentally summons something scary to her home.
10 chapters.

I think that story codes act a little as spoilers. These writings are predictable enough already, at least the ones I come up with. For "Possession" I will just give general M/g nc. There is a link to more detailed story codes.


Angel
Man falls for a magical girl and leaves everything for her
M/g

My entry to writing contest "Magical children". Did not do very well.
Here I have added a penultimate passage that I felt was missing from the version submitted to the writing contest.
Here is a link to the original text and the feedback it got on ATF forum.


Congenital
A hard-boiled adventure in criminal underworld

My entry to writing contest "Twins".
This one did even worse in the competition, but I got carried away enough to write a lot.
13 chapters and a short epiloque.


Rape Proof
Trying to rape-proof a child

My entry to writing contest "Sexual Education"


Supplementary Education
Math lesson for 3rd grader Paige

Ispired by writing contest "Sexual Education"


Also, formatting is way different on a phone. Gonna have to check all of these and make them at least Android-compatible.
Funny, it also depends on which way you hold the phone. And the size of the window on a desktop.


Still getting to know this wiki format. Apologies for all the mess I will make.