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Since no mention of molestation of his daughters appears I shall be changing the text in August's bio to more clearly define that he is the molester.
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:A hard working man, terribly saddened by the death of his wife. He’s trying his best to rise his children on his own.
:A hard working man, terribly saddened by the death of his wife. He’s trying his best to raise his children on his own.
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== Biography ==
== Biography ==


Joram is deeply religious guy who was quite happy with his life and family, thinking being devout christians would provide for anything they would need.
Joram is a deeply religious guy who was quite happy with his life and family, thinking being devout Christians would provide for anything they would need.


When his wife died giving birth to his youngest son, Joram was devastated. At first he was angry at the baby, blaming him for the dead of her loved one, and thus naming him Judas. Soon thereafter, the deacon made him understand that the lord worked in mysterious ways, and that his wife was needed elsewhere to fulfill the lord’s word.
When his wife died giving birth to his youngest son, Joram was devastated. At first, he was angry at the baby, blaming him for the death of his loved one, and thus naming him Judas. Soon thereafter, the deacon made him understand that the Lord worked in mysterious ways and that his wife was needed elsewhere to fulfil the Lord's word.


Joram had to admit that his children were blameless, specially after forming a deeper bond with them, being forced to take care of them much more than a man usually does (with help from his, and her wife parents).
Joram had to admit that his children were blameless, especially after forming a deeper bond with them, being forced to take care of them much more than a man usually does (with help from his, and his wife's parents).


Joram now blames himself for the dead of his wife, thinking it was punishment for his sins, since he has been having impure thoughts about other woman.
Joram now blames himself for the death of his wife, thinking it was punishment for his sins since he has been having impure thoughts about other women.


<font color="red">'''WIP''' Suggestions accepted.</font>
<font color="red">'''WIP''' Suggestions accepted.</font>

Revision as of 21:05, 1 October 2017

Joram Fine

Name
Joram Fine
Age
35
Birthday
January
Description
A hard working man, terribly saddened by the death of his wife. He’s trying his best to raise his children on his own.

Family

Wife (deceased)
Daphne Fine
Son – 13
August Fine
Daughter –10
Charity Fine
Daughter – 7
Bevvy Fine
Son – 6
Judas Fine

Biography

Joram is a deeply religious guy who was quite happy with his life and family, thinking being devout Christians would provide for anything they would need.

When his wife died giving birth to his youngest son, Joram was devastated. At first, he was angry at the baby, blaming him for the death of his loved one, and thus naming him Judas. Soon thereafter, the deacon made him understand that the Lord worked in mysterious ways and that his wife was needed elsewhere to fulfil the Lord's word.

Joram had to admit that his children were blameless, especially after forming a deeper bond with them, being forced to take care of them much more than a man usually does (with help from his, and his wife's parents).

Joram now blames himself for the death of his wife, thinking it was punishment for his sins since he has been having impure thoughts about other women.

WIP Suggestions accepted.