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I liked the concept of the universe remote but was not a fan of the main protagonist being a 10-year-old boy. This we have Ken. A 29-year-old virgin (soon to be wizard) who is just trying to live life day to day. He has a very strong arrogant streak that will get him into trouble repeatedly as the story progresses. I also have a story path partially planned where he opens the back of the remote and breaks something which causes the results to be more erratic than not regardless of how attuned he becomes. -[[User:Quiller|Quiller]] ([[User talk:Quiller|talk]]) 04:49, 16 October 2018 (CEST)
I liked the concept of the universe remote but was not a fan of the main protagonist being a 10-year-old boy. This we have Ken. A 29-year-old virgin (soon to be wizard) who is just trying to live life day to day. He has a very strong arrogant streak that will get him into trouble repeatedly as the story progresses. I also have a story path partially planned where he opens the back of the remote and breaks something which causes the results to be more erratic than not regardless of how attuned he becomes. -[[User:Quiller|Quiller]] ([[User talk:Quiller|talk]]) 04:49, 16 October 2018 (CEST)
That sounds great, but I was planning on making the case of the remote seamless and indestructible; so he would need to use the remote to open the remote up (at least in my original concept).  If you can fit that into your storyline, I would appreciate it.  Additionally, I didn't have the box containing the remote smaller than the remote and book (though that Tardus-like quality would fit well for the inside of the remote).  Also due to the heft of the book, the box is relatively heavy.  Contrary to myth, paper is quite heavy for its size.  I look forward to what you write.  --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 15:03, 16 October 2018 (CEST)

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I liked the concept of the universe remote but was not a fan of the main protagonist being a 10-year-old boy. This we have Ken. A 29-year-old virgin (soon to be wizard) who is just trying to live life day to day. He has a very strong arrogant streak that will get him into trouble repeatedly as the story progresses. I also have a story path partially planned where he opens the back of the remote and breaks something which causes the results to be more erratic than not regardless of how attuned he becomes. -Quiller (talk) 04:49, 16 October 2018 (CEST)


That sounds great, but I was planning on making the case of the remote seamless and indestructible; so he would need to use the remote to open the remote up (at least in my original concept). If you can fit that into your storyline, I would appreciate it. Additionally, I didn't have the box containing the remote smaller than the remote and book (though that Tardus-like quality would fit well for the inside of the remote). Also due to the heft of the book, the box is relatively heavy. Contrary to myth, paper is quite heavy for its size. I look forward to what you write. --Elerneron (talk) 15:03, 16 October 2018 (CEST)