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I updated it just now, with a better synopses tell me what you think when you get a chance. [[User:BluePanda|BluePanda]] ([[User talk:BluePanda|talk]]) 20:56, 22 February 2019 (CET) | I updated it just now, with a better synopses tell me what you think when you get a chance. [[User:BluePanda|BluePanda]] ([[User talk:BluePanda|talk]]) 20:56, 22 February 2019 (CET) | ||
It looks good. Might want to find a way to break up the first section into shorter sentences and a few different paragraphs, though; it's a slightly awkward read on mobile in its current layout. [[User:Claws61821|Claws61821]] ([[User talk:Claws61821|talk]]) 09:45, 23 February 2019 (CET) | |||
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Okay yeah. That's pretty much what I meant, BluePanda. Thanks for adding that. Claws61821 (talk) 03:05, 23 February 2019 (CET)
I updated it just now, with a better synopses tell me what you think when you get a chance. BluePanda (talk) 20:56, 22 February 2019 (CET)
It looks good. Might want to find a way to break up the first section into shorter sentences and a few different paragraphs, though; it's a slightly awkward read on mobile in its current layout. Claws61821 (talk) 09:45, 23 February 2019 (CET)