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I do agree with you on the amount of people being as much a base factor as how far she is from safety, in hindsight it's such an integral part to exhibitionism I can't believed I forgot it, so I'll most likely go back and add that in. As for the balcony, I wasn't initially going to include it because I can't think of how to make it little more than a footnote of a chapter before moving on to one of the other options, mainly because it's only from the left or right she would risk being seen since the building overlooks a river and nobody would be able to make her out on the other side. Your thoughts? --[[User:NoGo45|NoGo45]] ([[User talk:NoGo45|talk]]) 21:28, 11 February 2020 (CET)
I do agree with you on the amount of people being as much a base factor as how far she is from safety, in hindsight it's such an integral part to exhibitionism I can't believed I forgot it, so I'll most likely go back and add that in. As for the balcony, I wasn't initially going to include it because I can't think of how to make it little more than a footnote of a chapter before moving on to one of the other options, mainly because it's only from the left or right she would risk being seen since the building overlooks a river and nobody would be able to make her out on the other side. Your thoughts? --[[User:NoGo45|NoGo45]] ([[User talk:NoGo45|talk]]) 21:28, 11 February 2020 (CET)
I somehow missed the overlooking a river part. I was thinking buildings across the street, or even near a park or something. Oh well, I'll switch to leave home naked so she can pretend to have gotten locked out. Maybe stick a towel in the door to make it look like the door shut on it and pulled it off? --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 22:03, 11 February 2020 (CET)

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May I make a request? Have her realize it's not so much where she is, as it is being seen by people. The only reason to do it away from home is because that's where people are. Since it's all about letting people see her, the safest way to experiment is to strip and play on the balcony. That will build her confidence to trying farther from home, and get her into more troubling situations due to her bravado. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 19:30, 11 February 2020 (CET)

I do agree with you on the amount of people being as much a base factor as how far she is from safety, in hindsight it's such an integral part to exhibitionism I can't believed I forgot it, so I'll most likely go back and add that in. As for the balcony, I wasn't initially going to include it because I can't think of how to make it little more than a footnote of a chapter before moving on to one of the other options, mainly because it's only from the left or right she would risk being seen since the building overlooks a river and nobody would be able to make her out on the other side. Your thoughts? --NoGo45 (talk) 21:28, 11 February 2020 (CET)

I somehow missed the overlooking a river part. I was thinking buildings across the street, or even near a park or something. Oh well, I'll switch to leave home naked so she can pretend to have gotten locked out. Maybe stick a towel in the door to make it look like the door shut on it and pulled it off? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 22:03, 11 February 2020 (CET)