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=Caleb Wright Age 26, School District IT worker.=
=Caleb Wright Age 26, School District IT worker.=
:[[TTR/Caleb|Caleb Wright/Workjump| On this jump Caleb went straight to work.]]
: [[TTR/Caleb/Workjump|On this jump Caleb went straight to work.]]
:[[TTR/Caleb|Caleb Wright/homejump| On this jump Caleb stayed home and played with his neighbor.]]
: [[TTR/Caleb/homejump|On this jump Caleb stayed home and played with his neighbor.]]
--[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 15:11, 22 March 2020 (CET)
--[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 15:11, 22 March 2020 (CET)

Revision as of 14:16, 22 March 2020

Interesting premise, one question and two suggestions. The question is, In your rules you say the standard setting involves no magic, mind control or supernatural elements, you also allow for authors to create other settings, so can these posses those elements.

Suggestions:

Put a return link on your about page that returns the reader to the front page.
On your jump page, if you want it to be the start page, don't have the names be the links. Have them be titles with the new jumps linked underneath. Otherwise someone is liable to just start writing on the next link page and ruin the transition page for other jumps. You can see examples of this in the start pages for "Disciplinary Action" and "Mother's Helping Hand". For example:

Caleb Wright Age 26, School District IT worker.

On this jump Caleb went straight to work.
On this jump Caleb stayed home and played with his neighbor.

--Telgar (talk) 15:11, 22 March 2020 (CET)