Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 19th, 2021/Trip to Trolleby/Stella knows about Emilia's concealed star: Difference between revisions

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This path is more fun I think. Stella's motivation isn't laid out too clearly, but it makes more sense here since she's kinda switching gears. Like she could get even better revenge on Heidi by messing with her black star strumpet friend. Part of me wants to tweak the dialogue on the other path to align with that, because on that side Stella thinks she's getting exactly what she had wanted, which is Heidi. Happy to do so if you'll allow me! Otherwise I'm just as happy to leave it. My thanks as well! --[[User:Villenia|Villenia]] ([[User talk:Villenia|talk]]) 22:59, 7 October 2022 (CEST)
This path is more fun I think. Stella's motivation isn't laid out too clearly, but it makes more sense here since she's kinda switching gears. Like she could get even better revenge on Heidi by messing with her black star strumpet friend. Part of me wants to tweak the dialogue on the other path to align with that, because on that side Stella thinks she's getting exactly what she had wanted, which is Heidi. Happy to do so if you'll allow me! Otherwise I'm just as happy to leave it. My thanks as well! --[[User:Villenia|Villenia]] ([[User talk:Villenia|talk]]) 22:59, 7 October 2022 (CEST)
On this path, I think it would also make more sense for Stella to assume that Heidi knows about Emilia's black star. Emilia is barely covering it and since she and Heidi went out together then it all fits. So the fun part would be that Stella thinks that Heidi doesn't know that ''Stella'' knows about that star, which is what would force Stella to be more sneaky about taking about advantage of it and keep Heidi from claiming Emilia for herself (and of course give Heidi her comeuppance by doing to Heidi what Heidi did to Stella) when in reality it's ''Heidi'' that doesn't know. Anyway, I'm sure you've thought this out already, but I like this path the more I think of it! --[[User:Villenia|Villenia]] ([[User talk:Villenia|talk]]) 23:15, 7 October 2022 (CEST)

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Ok this was clever the two pages are practically the same but with very different results, i love it is like a mass effect game type of choice, now about the options i love this one a lot, Stella is growing on me really quickly. nothing against the teachers but you know they sound like the responsible adults so sounds a bit more boring. but Stella seems to be the bullyish character and i love her already, and boi is she desperate she must really like her little friend there the things she was proposing to do holy shit. Emilia is in for a treat now the question is she gonna wait until Heidi leaves to take advantage of that black star maybe fuck Heidi a little and then Let Emilia stay with her (since she doesn't want Heidi to know) or she is just gonna do it the moment they are in the cabin and make Heidi watch or something. or i could be super wrong and I'm assuming incorrectly either away and I'm super excited Great Work and thank you for all the effort you been doing so much effort thank you a lot. --Xephion (talk) 22:43, 7 October 2022 (CEST)

This path is more fun I think. Stella's motivation isn't laid out too clearly, but it makes more sense here since she's kinda switching gears. Like she could get even better revenge on Heidi by messing with her black star strumpet friend. Part of me wants to tweak the dialogue on the other path to align with that, because on that side Stella thinks she's getting exactly what she had wanted, which is Heidi. Happy to do so if you'll allow me! Otherwise I'm just as happy to leave it. My thanks as well! --Villenia (talk) 22:59, 7 October 2022 (CEST)

On this path, I think it would also make more sense for Stella to assume that Heidi knows about Emilia's black star. Emilia is barely covering it and since she and Heidi went out together then it all fits. So the fun part would be that Stella thinks that Heidi doesn't know that Stella knows about that star, which is what would force Stella to be more sneaky about taking about advantage of it and keep Heidi from claiming Emilia for herself (and of course give Heidi her comeuppance by doing to Heidi what Heidi did to Stella) when in reality it's Heidi that doesn't know. Anyway, I'm sure you've thought this out already, but I like this path the more I think of it! --Villenia (talk) 23:15, 7 October 2022 (CEST)