Difference between revisions of "Talk:Big Sister Is Watching You/Chapter One"

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I hope you like my edit. If you don't, it can all be reverted back. --[[User:Hope|Hope]] ([[User talk:Hope|talk]]) 13:25, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
I hope you like my edit. If you don't, it can all be reverted back. --[[User:Hope|Hope]] ([[User talk:Hope|talk]]) 13:25, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
It looks good, thank you! One of my main struggles with writing is keeping it clear; you improved it. Also added some nice details! --[[User:Fish|Fish]] ([[User talk:Fish|talk]]) 18:46, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
It looks good, thank you! One of my main struggles with writing is keeping it clear; you improved it. Also added some nice details! --[[User:Fish|Fish]] ([[User talk:Fish|talk]]) 18:46, 3 July 2023 (UTC)

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I hope you like my edit. If you don't, it can all be reverted back. --Hope (talk) 13:25, 3 July 2023 (UTC)

It looks good, thank you! One of my main struggles with writing is keeping it clear; you improved it. Also added some nice details! --Fish (talk) 18:46, 3 July 2023 (UTC)

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