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[[Congenital]]<br> | |||
My entry to writing contest "Twins".<br> | |||
Revision as of 10:04, 22 November 2023
I am not a native English speaker. I hope the unnatural use of language works to add flavor to my texts, but of course I try my best to make it flow.
Kids
A man's encounters with preteen prostitutes
4 chapters.
M/g, M/b, M/gg, g/M, b/M
The first story I have finished.The chapters are somewhat self-contained.
Possession
First-grader Ellie accidentally summons something scary to her home.
10 chapters.
I think that story codes act a little as spoilers. These writings are predictable enough already, at least the ones I come up with. For "Possession" I will just give general M/g nc. There is a link to more detailed story codes.
Angel
Man falls for a magical girl and leaves everything for her
M/g
My entry to writing contest "Magical children". Did not do very well.
Here I have added a penultimate passage that I felt was missing from the version submitted to the writing contest.
Here is a link to the original text and the feedback it got on ATF forum.
Congenital
My entry to writing contest "Twins".
Also, formatting is way different on a phone. Gonna have to check all of these and make them at least Android-compatible.
Funny, it also depends on which way you hold the phone. And the size of the window on a desktop.
Still getting to know this wiki format. Apologies for all the mess I will make.