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[https://allthefallen.moe/forum/index.php?threads/angel-m-g-contest.52886/#post-20584565 Here] is a link to the original text and the feedback it got on ATF forum.
[https://allthefallen.moe/forum/index.php?threads/angel-m-g-contest.52886/#post-20584565 Here] is a link to the original text and the feedback it got on ATF forum.


[[Congenital]]<br>
My entry to writing contest "Twins".<br>





Revision as of 10:04, 22 November 2023

I am not a native English speaker. I hope the unnatural use of language works to add flavor to my texts, but of course I try my best to make it flow.


Kids
A man's encounters with preteen prostitutes
4 chapters.
M/g, M/b, M/gg, g/M, b/M
The first story I have finished.The chapters are somewhat self-contained.


Possession
First-grader Ellie accidentally summons something scary to her home.
10 chapters.

I think that story codes act a little as spoilers. These writings are predictable enough already, at least the ones I come up with. For "Possession" I will just give general M/g nc. There is a link to more detailed story codes.


Angel
Man falls for a magical girl and leaves everything for her
M/g

My entry to writing contest "Magical children". Did not do very well.
Here I have added a penultimate passage that I felt was missing from the version submitted to the writing contest.
Here is a link to the original text and the feedback it got on ATF forum.


Congenital
My entry to writing contest "Twins".


Also, formatting is way different on a phone. Gonna have to check all of these and make them at least Android-compatible.
Funny, it also depends on which way you hold the phone. And the size of the window on a desktop.


Still getting to know this wiki format. Apologies for all the mess I will make.