Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week
I moved some comments to their related page.
I think we have enough content for the first week, otherwise he's not going to have time to rest between sessions, and I don't think we want that. As soon as some of the paths for this first week begin to close down on themselves, I'll inaugurate the next section, a couple weeks in the future, so we can see how things evolve. For this first week the most extreme paths should lead to a bad end, since it's just beginning, in the next weeks he will have more leverage to do the things he wants without ending in jail or dead.
Actually, that brings up a weakness in my writing style. I am just not very good at writing stupidly irresponsible characters. I habitually write them to be cunning and doing a fairly convincing job of portraying their actions as something that they can get away with. I also habitually do not include options that would result in a bad ending, even if my intention is to have some bad ending routes. I'm just not good at it, and something in my brain just refuses to include the option I know is bad in the first place. Well, I guess I can try to fight against it and have some options for him to rape some girls when that's clearly beyond the purview of appropriate punishments for their actions. Jemini (talk) 13:43, 26 September 2017 (CEST)