Talk:Uncanny Valley

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Interesting story. I liked the start. But lost interest with the wife cucking her husband with Wade. Not into interracial or MC getting cucked. Might want to put those in the tags to warn future readers. --Telgar (talk) 21:10, 30 March 2020 (CEST)

Enormous walls of text can be a turn off for some readers. Adding direct links to the chapters makes it easier to set the story down, because they make it a tad easier to find the place where you stopped. (It also makes it easier to edit individual chapters) --MrPib (talk) 23:06, 30 March 2020 (CEST)

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