Talk:Sold on the Web/deliveryeasy

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I tried to clean it up a bit, if you don't like what I've done you can revert my changes. --MrPib (talk) 23:46, 29 April 2020 (CEST)

The permissions on this story are set to Errors Only. This may or may not constitute that. I will rely on the author's interpretation of your edits. --Elerneron (talk) 04:11, 30 April 2020 (CEST)

Alright. They asked for help because English isn't their primary language. So I interpreted it to mean it can be edited to be better understood in english.

When doing edits like this, I tend to read the page until I reach something out of place "she sais we are go to store" and will fix it after looking for contextual clues as to whether it's past, present or future tense, or if it's in first or second person.

For now, unless I get approval from the author, I'll stick with minor Grammer (I didn't fix everything because I wasn't sure) --MrPib (talk) 04:35, 30 April 2020 (CEST)

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