Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 19th, 2021/Trip to Trolleby
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Revision as of 19:00, 5 October 2022 by Innocent Ruin (talk | contribs)
I fixed a few little typos but also expanded on some of the dialogue. Love it overall, but some parts felt a little rushed and I thought Stella needed to come across as a bit more hurt for her to still have something to settle from a year ago. --Villenia (talk) 20:31, 5 October 2022 (CEST)
Appreciate it. I'll copy the changes to my files, so I don't accidentally revert them. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 21:00, 5 October 2022 (CEST)