Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 19th, 2021/Trip to Trolleby/Emilia is confident that her secret is safe

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Love the changes the way it feels more like a conversation and the way she sounds is great too i give it a more lively conversation, but i have a question is this unique to this path only or not? if you are busy i can try to copy paste it, but since i dont know if this was an unique conversation to this path and not the other, i didn't want to do it without permission. --Xephion (talk) 02:49, 8 October 2022 (CEST)

I finished up with my edits. Probably best to let IR copy what they like, if anything. Just happy to contribute! --Villenia (talk) 08:23, 8 October 2022 (CEST)

yeah that makes sense to let innocent copy paste it if he likes it the only reason i even mentioned it is that at least that first part is the exact same in the other path too but you are right innocent should be the one who decides and Villenia love those edits they are great they add more to the conversation. great work --Xephion (talk) 08:40, 8 October 2022 (CEST)

Yeah, don't touch the other page, please. I might take some inspiration from here (and I did like the changes), but it's still a completely different dynamic with Stella being distracted by Emilia, so it makes sense for the Stella/Heidi scene to steer in a slightly different direction. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 12:17, 8 October 2022 (CEST)

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