Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Running/Office

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From your description I'm guessing you catched Benevolence and Judas, as well as Aliya. For a moment I thought you had catched the children of the secretary, but I see you avoided that. I'm also guessing the running girl was Ginny, and here I have to point out that he had already meet her when he visited his sister classroom, she was the one sitting on the front row, almost showing her panties and asking uncomfortable questions, so perhaps he should at least remember her. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 17:51, 26 September 2017 (CEST)


That was pretty much what I was thinking, didn't know how to take the timeline though. The first week bit is a little confusing sequence of events wise, although it kinda does make sense visiting his sister's class would be potentially near the beginning of the very first day, so that change should probably be made. Jemini (talk) 18:13, 26 September 2017 (CEST)