Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Quarter/Diya/Accept/Alone

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Very nice description of the brothel and it's girls. I hadn't put much thought on it, and I love the way you depict it. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 17:35, 28 December 2017 (CET)

This would really be another case of my spontaneous writing changing the plan ultimately. I had originally planned that one of the "Aunts" were going to completely dress him down. (Still might happen.) But since Diya hasn't told him anything I wound up on-the-spot getting into their heads and going for a more gentle approach since they understand he's not actively pursuing Diya right now. Jemini (talk) 19:56, 28 December 2017 (CET)

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