Talk:April's Punishment/Part 7

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Gotta admit, I'm just a tad disappointed that at least one of them didn't wind up naked at the park lol. Strip April naked for getting mad at the boy talking about her panties, make her sit in his lap legs spread wide so everyone can get a good look at her kitty, then here the stranger lady praise Daddy for doing such a good job of disciplining her. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 05:12, 7 December 2021 (CET)

Thanks for the feedback. I’m trying to build up to it a bit more, but this one ended up being really hard to write for a few reasons. There’s a few spots in this one that I think fall a little flat, so I still have quite a bit of work to do on this part. I’m really excited for what I think will be the next part, though: after a normal week at school, April is excited to attend a birthday party that her whole class is invited to, but she has to finish her homework before she can go. She forgets about the homework, lies about it and dad finds out just in time to show up at the party unannounced and give her what she deserves in front of everyone. --Hgcollins (talk) 05:24, 7 December 2021 (CET)