Talk:April's Punishment/Part 10

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Maybe instead of on her princess bed, fuck her right on the kitchen table while mom bustles around the kitchen making supper like it's an every day thing to happen. A call to the school will inform them of the loss of clothes for a week. That should be continued (or escalated) at home too.... say a month with no clothes? "Obviously" her home punishments "aren't working" yet, so for every load of cum she gets at school, Daddy fucks her twice lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:36, 9 December 2021 (CET)

Just wait until things escalate at school later in the week… The kitchen table thing reminds me of an old story I wrote a long time ago but have been thinking of rewriting recently. It’s about a girl who starts getting fucked by her older brothers and eventually her father. She starts to like it after a while, but I wanted to move on to other stories. I never made it to the dinner party where the neighbors are invited over and she gets passed around and fucked on the table while the rest of the family is eating like it’s totally normal. I randomly remembered that story last night. It’s called Fun with Naomi. It started out pretty good but kind of fell apart so I never kept going with it. I might dig it up and rework it a bit. --Hgcollins (talk) 19:26, 9 December 2021 (CET)

I love that story! I can't find it anymore though. There was a site a long while back that had your stories, and there was another series "Dave and His Boys" by someone else, that I loved. Tried to do an RP as Naomi, but it fell apart and just wasn't the same. I so wanted to see her get turned into the family fuck toy, never allowed clothes, never allowed to say "no". The RP I tried was on track to turn her into the town's fuck toy. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 19:31, 9 December 2021 (CET)

Yeah, I need to update it and post it here. I just found the original though. It’s on asstr.org on a writer named Lasiter’s page. You pretty much have to use a search engine to find it now that the site is all messed up. Lasiter has another good story that’s similar called Playing with the Boys or something like that. I always liked that one. If I remember correctly, I wanted Naomi’s father to lose his job and start pimping her out. Yeah, I definitely need to pick up that story again. I think I struggled with it at the time because it was in first person. --Hgcollins (talk) 19:37, 9 December 2021 (CET)