Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 17th, 2021/Laura

This whole story is incredible! To the author: did you draw all the art yourself? It's pretty detailed with the expressions and clothing changes too. --Green (talk) 02:16, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

• Thank you! It's a mish-mash of old ideas I've had, most of which I either lost motivation for. I'm glad it's turning out to be enjoyable! The drawings aren't mine, I couldn't draw a stick figure straight with a ruler. They're just suitable ones I've found from pixiv and exhentai. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 11:07, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

Fun idea: Laura calls Emilia to warn her but isn't direct, tries to tell her "those girls are going to get you into trouble" and Emilia doesn't listen. When Laura shows up with Daniel, Emilia is nearly scared straight, except she breaks the rules trying to protect her friends and gets punished for it. If you leave a branch to something like this available I'd be willing to write it myself. --Villenia (talk) 05:09, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

• That is indeed a fun idea, and I'm all in favor of more branching and more options, as well as you (or anyone else who's interested) contributing to some of them. I'll figure out some way an option like that is left open. There's now an option to "warn her" as you suggested. If you're still interested in writing feel free to rename the link to anything you feel is suitable. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 22:02, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

I did say this in the other page to villenia but i feel i should tell you directly i love what you been doing too (not only this page but all the other too) i just want you to know we love your work and i love the master/pet dynamic and bestiality so thank you for this awesome story. --Xephion (talk) 09:38, 19 September 2022 (CEST)