Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 17th, 2021/Laura

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This whole story is incredible! To the author: did you draw all the art yourself? It's pretty detailed with the expressions and clothing changes too. --Green (talk) 02:16, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

  • Thank you! It's a mish-mash of old ideas I've had, most of which I lost motivation for. I'm glad it's turning out to be enjoyable! The drawings aren't mine, I couldn't draw a stick figure straight with a ruler. They're just suitable ones I've found from pixiv and exhentai. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 11:07, 10 September 2021 (UTC)


Fun idea: Laura calls Emilia to warn her but isn't direct, tries to tell her "those girls are going to get you into trouble" and Emilia doesn't listen. When Laura shows up with Daniel, Emilia is nearly scared straight, except she breaks the rules trying to protect her friends and gets punished for it. If you leave a branch to something like this available I'd be willing to write it myself. --Villenia (talk) 05:09, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

  • That is indeed a fun idea, and I'm all in favor of more branching and more options, as well as you (or anyone else who's interested) contributing to some of them. I'll figure out some way an option like that is left open. There's now an option to "warn her" as you suggested. If you're still interested in writing feel free to rename the link to anything you feel is suitable. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 22:02, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

I did say this in the other page to villenia but i feel i should tell you directly i love what you been doing too (not only this page but all the other too) i just want you to know we love your work and i love the master/pet dynamic and bestiality so thank you for this awesome story. --Xephion (talk) 09:38, 19 September 2022 (CEST)

  • Appreciate the feedback! I'm struggling a bit with motivation to write anything right now. (like, I get an itch to write sometimes but either can't keep focused or real life gets in the way. ) Petplay and bestiality are both things I want to explore too, although admittedly, I only have some vague plans for how to go about with it. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 14:04, 19 September 2022 (CEST)

Hey no problem and is fine everyone gets demotivated one piece of advice is to write any idea you have somewhere so when you feel motivated again you can use that idea you had,

About the other subject this universe has so many ways to make that happen it can be a more personal approach like the ones vallenia is doing mother being controlling or letting her fetishes go wild or it can be a but more serious like the daughter do something to angry the gods and she gets punish with a Club or she tries the club and someone In the family or circle of friends or even strangers or even a bully from school that could be male or female finds the club while bullying her (not force her it find it when she was already wearing it) or a rich girl from town/school tricks her into wearing one or to get punish to get one after all she doesn't know much about the game yet I'm sure people who have been living there longer know a few tricks into getting someone to wear one specially someone rich i imagine without getting punish themselves like blackmail because unless im wrong you can t draw a symbol on someone as a trick but no where in the rules it says they cant be blackmail or trick into drawing it themselves or to break a rule for them to egt punish so the rich girl could use this to take advantage of the situation/rules to get a pet. There is so many ways to go for this because how well you made this story and whatever you do I'm sure people will love it. (of course im assuming that blackmail works sine in the rules it doesn't say it wouldnt the only part that talks about it is dont draw on others but nothing about making them do it themselves or to make them get punish into it and that's another way to explore this too)

The reason i feel i had to come and say thank you to you and vallenia was because atf stories don't have many people who make accounts since is really hard to do so and even harder to post things like this but im certain there a lot of people who love this story a lot more than the poll choose to show (after all to use the polls you need to make an account) and i feel everyone deserve praise after their incredible work they do, so thank you again for the amazing story. --Xephion (talk) 06:09, 22 September 2022 (CEST)

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