Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 19th, 2021/Trip to Trolleby/Stella faces no more distractions or obstacles

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Love it! Made small grammatical changes and a couple of little extras. Stella explaining her openness to boys doesn't quite sit right with me though. I think it's fine overall, especially if she has a need/desire to use or manipulate someone, but I feel it needs some tweaking. I may take a stab at that later and you can revert if you like. --Villenia (talk) 19:28, 12 October 2022 (CEST)

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