Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 21st, 2021/Emilia approaches Henry

I like the history lesson part a lot. Henna being just as involved with Heidi's development as Henry is makes sense. Not anything I would change in that department, except maybe retcon one or two sentences to be in line with what Heidi and Henry were in my opinion doing the day Emilia lost her virginity! 😉

That said, I almost feel like Henry didn't actually try to "teach" Emilia much here regarding the game itself. Like, he even recognizes that Emilia wore black but didn't so much as ask her about it or question her decision in that regard. Or maybe I missed that on the first read? I also think that the bit with Henry getting carried away towards the end is a missed opportunity as he focuses so much on himself, when he could use that as a teaching opportunity for Emilia more than he does here.

Maybe this is just my bias talking since my ideal Emilia is much less docile (only gets submissive when "push comes to shove") and much more of a "put my foot down to get what I want" kinda girl, but I think she deserves at least one good talking-to that isn't a "Sven-esque" lecture, and more of an encouragement in that direction. Henry in my opinion is perfect for that. I don't want to do heavy editorial, but I'll probably stab at this after I get home from work today and expand on few parts a little. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 07:49, 20 October 2022 (CEST)