User contributions for DrAlithe

16 December 2017

• 13:5113:51, 16 December 2017 diff hist +174‎ User talk:Telgar ‎No edit summary
• 13:1913:19, 16 December 2017 diff hist +18‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Quarter/Letter ‎ Some small edits. Nothing more than basic mistakes everyone makes.

11 October 2017

• 09:2609:26, 11 October 2017 diff hist +5‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Beatriz/Twins/Sleep ‎No edit summary
• 09:1909:19, 11 October 2017 diff hist −4‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Beatriz/Twins ‎No edit summary

4 October 2017

• 22:3322:33, 4 October 2017 diff hist +1‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Sex-Ed/Seventh Grade ‎No edit summary
• 22:3122:31, 4 October 2017 diff hist +17‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Sex-Ed/Fourth Grade ‎No edit summary

1 October 2017

• 22:3322:33, 1 October 2017 diff hist +8‎ m Disciplinary Action/Characters/Sixth Grade/Tihana ‎No edit summary
• 22:1022:10, 1 October 2017 diff hist +22‎ m Disciplinary Action/Characters/Ninth Grade/Perl ‎No edit summary
• 22:0622:06, 1 October 2017 diff hist +13‎ m Disciplinary Action/Characters/Accardy/Amethyst ‎No edit summary
• 22:0422:04, 1 October 2017 diff hist +3‎ m Disciplinary Action/Characters/Fifth Grade/Alabaster ‎No edit summary
• 22:0022:00, 1 October 2017 diff hist +2‎ m Disciplinary Action/Characters/Marlow/Wife ‎No edit summary
• 21:5721:57, 1 October 2017 diff hist +5‎ m Disciplinary Action/Characters/Marlow/Husband ‎No edit summary
• 21:5421:54, 1 October 2017 diff hist 0‎ m Disciplinary Action/Characters/Third Grade/Ginny ‎No edit summary
• 21:5221:52, 1 October 2017 diff hist +2‎ m Disciplinary Action/Characters/Tenth Grade/Bartolome ‎ Format
• 21:5221:52, 1 October 2017 diff hist +1‎ Disciplinary Action/Characters/Tenth Grade/Bartolome ‎ Replaced Octobre with Birthday I do not know why that was their or if it was supposed to be his birth month instead of April
• 21:4721:47, 1 October 2017 diff hist 0‎ Disciplinary Action/Characters/Fifth Grade/Kittie ‎ Specially is an adverb that means for a special purpose. Especially is an adverb that means to a great extent or is used to single out one thing or person over others.
• 21:4321:43, 1 October 2017 diff hist −1‎ m Disciplinary Action/Characters/Tenth Grade/Alycia ‎No edit summary
• 21:4121:41, 1 October 2017 diff hist +7‎ m Disciplinary Action/Characters/Eleventh Grade ‎No edit summary
• 21:2721:27, 1 October 2017 diff hist +29‎ m Disciplinary Action/Characters/Fourth Grade ‎No edit summary
• 21:2321:23, 1 October 2017 diff hist +93‎ Disciplinary Action/Characters/Carmichael/Brandon ‎ Combining for a better sound
• 21:1521:15, 1 October 2017 diff hist +188‎ User talk:Tod Naturlich ‎No edit summary
• 21:1121:11, 1 October 2017 diff hist 0‎ m Disciplinary Action/Characters/Kinder-First/Laura ‎No edit summary
• 21:0921:09, 1 October 2017 diff hist +52‎ Disciplinary Action/Characters/Eighth Grade/August ‎ Clarifying the story since before it sounded like the father was molesting his sister not that August was molesting his sister.
• 21:0521:05, 1 October 2017 diff hist +4‎ Disciplinary Action/Characters/Fine/Joram ‎ Since no mention of molestation of his daughters appears I shall be changing the text in August's bio to more clearly define that he is the molester.
• 20:5920:59, 1 October 2017 diff hist −10‎ m Disciplinary Action/Characters/Eighth Grade/August ‎No edit summary
• 20:5720:57, 1 October 2017 diff hist +13‎ Disciplinary Action/Characters/Kinder-First/Judas ‎ He has two older sisters I do not know which is more likely one for him to follow so I choose the younger one.
• 20:5520:55, 1 October 2017 diff hist +3‎ m Disciplinary Action/Characters/Second Grade/Bevvy ‎No edit summary
• 20:3120:31, 1 October 2017 diff hist +3‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Tihana/Office/Punishment/Impregnate/Parents/No Deal ‎No edit summary
• 20:2620:26, 1 October 2017 diff hist 0‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Tihana/Office/Punishment/Impregnate/Parents ‎No edit summary
• 20:2020:20, 1 October 2017 diff hist −1‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Tihana/Office/Punishment/Impregnate ‎ grantee is the English word for someone granted a grant (loan). guarantee is the word for a promise of something or to make sure something would happen.
• 20:0420:04, 1 October 2017 diff hist −23‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Tihana/Office/Educate ‎ The original tear bit was awkward I believe it may have been due to the close beginnings.
• 19:5719:57, 1 October 2017 diff hist −3‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Tihana/Office/Exposed ‎ I see now that you are mostly writing in present tense which while harder is still fine. I should note that somethings in the girls speech are messed up, however, since this may be a choice I have left them in.
• 19:4619:46, 1 October 2017 diff hist +6‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Tihana/Office/Exposed ‎ Some minor issues in spelling and grammar only thing of importance is that you have a habit of switching tenses within the story. Typically, people write in past tense for everything except speech. Unfortunately, for you, I am bad at editing those out.

27 September 2017

• 02:2302:23, 27 September 2017 diff hist +190‎ User talk:Tod Naturlich ‎No edit summary
• 02:1702:17, 27 September 2017 diff hist +10‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Beatriz/Meet Third Grade ‎No edit summary
• 02:1202:12, 27 September 2017 diff hist −1‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Beatriz ‎ To clarify hyphens are used to create combined words typically to form an adjective to describe the noun. For example "a 400 page book" would be "a 400-page book" this is due to '400-page' describing the noun 'book'
• 02:0702:07, 27 September 2017 diff hist +335‎ User talk:Tod Naturlich ‎No edit summary
• 02:0002:00, 27 September 2017 diff hist −5‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Suzy/End/Diapers/Cumshot ‎ Test for fixing italics
• 01:5601:56, 27 September 2017 diff hist +245‎ User talk:Tod Naturlich ‎No edit summary
• 01:5301:53, 27 September 2017 diff hist +233‎ User talk:Tod Naturlich ‎No edit summary
• 01:4901:49, 27 September 2017 diff hist +1‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Suzy/End/Diapers/Clean ‎No edit summary current
• 01:4201:42, 27 September 2017 diff hist −5‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week ‎No edit summary
• 01:3401:34, 27 September 2017 diff hist +2‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Suzy/End/Diapers ‎ Took to take in this part of speech the present (take) would be used. When directly speaking to someone their are commas on all open sides so if it is in the middle it is surrounded and at the ends it is covered on the side into the sentence. current

26 September 2017

• 23:1623:16, 26 September 2017 diff hist 0‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Nurse/Meet ‎ not to now, loose is like a poorly tied knot and lose is to not win, minor commas and tense, PhD does not get the dots, believes is to believe in and beliefs is the concept of a belief; plural

10 September 2017

• 21:1721:17, 10 September 2017 diff hist +649‎ User talk:Tod Naturlich ‎No edit summary
• 21:1421:14, 10 September 2017 diff hist −100‎ User:DrAlithe ‎No edit summary current
• 21:1421:14, 10 September 2017 diff hist +100‎ User:DrAlithe ‎No edit summary
• 19:1019:10, 10 September 2017 diff hist +5‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Beatriz/Home ‎ chat to chatting and chase to chased
• 18:2418:24, 10 September 2017 diff hist 0‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Beatriz/Meet Third Grade ‎ past tense to future tense. broke to break.
• 18:2118:21, 10 September 2017 diff hist −1‎ m Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Beatriz/Meet Third Grade ‎ had an e before stranger.