Talk:Yes/Tom & Tash/D-1/Foursome 1/Katie's point of view

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This one was quite a bit harder to write, so I really really need some feedback on this. Does it work? Does it captur Katie's point of view? Is there anything I can do, change or add to make it work better? Enjoy! !--Jackmaster (talk) 15:26, 6 March 2017 (CET)