Talk:2T4U/Soulice De-void

I'm actually liking where this character is going. I will be blunt and say that the level of writing skill you are showing is fairly below par for the rest of this story, but you have found a really good way to compensate for your skill by giving this character a voice that fits the level you are at. Since he is a spirit, and a "half-soul" at that, it makes perfect sense for his tone to be detached, ethereal, and lacking in the level of detail seen in other parts of the story. Since you seem to know your limits well enough to come up with a solution like this, I am quite sure you will improve a lot in the future. I'm interested to see your progress in the future, and I hope you keep writing. Jemini (talk) 12:34, 30 March 2018 (CEST)