Talk:Daycare manager/Hannah Marshal/Home/Bathroom/1st/Masturbate/Pee/Uncomfortable
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Three comments on this one:
- You have an overlapping of horniness states, the first group of options are marked
horniness < 8, while the other group is forHorniness > 7. What happens atHorniness = 7.5, at that point both options apply. (Even is Horniness cannot take non-integer values, it looks weird, it should beHorniness <= 7andHorniness > 7). - You have parameters to make options disappear (disappear at abusiveness 20+) and options that make options appear (Patience 5+). I would strongly suggest you unify either one or the other, to simplify development. Which one to use depends a lot on the implementation, but I think it's more useful to mark them with what they need to appear. So instead of
disappear at abusiveness 20+, you can putabusiveness < 20. - The two different parts of the text that you separate by Horniness are actually extremely similar, so much so that they can easily be made into one, like so:
"Aren't you going to use the toilet?" You ask her. After around 10 more seconds of her staring at her knees, Hannah tightly shuts her eyes and begins squeezing out her pee into the toilet. The sound of her urine stream trickling into the bowl below sends a strange stimulation through your chest that goes down through your balls, speeding up the speed of your strokes. [Horniness > 7] Oh god, this has got you SO fucking close you're about to cum!
Abusiveness < 25, Horniness <= 7
Abusiveness < 20
- You could probably still stop (Patience > 5, Horniness <= 7)
- Send her out when she's done so you can finish (Horniness <= 7)
- Finish on the floor
- Finish in the sink
- Finish in the toilet, after she gets up (Horniness <= 7)
Abusiveness > 0
- Finish on her pussy (Horniness <= 7)
- Finish on her shirt
- Finish on her face
- Finish in her panties
- Have her give you a blow job on the toilet (Horniness <= 7)
Try to fuck her when she's done (Horniness <= 7)