Talk:Offline/Keep a firm hold and take your little cousin's cherry

Ok, there we go. What do you think? That seem roughly in line with the characters? I was having a hard time grasping the style before now, which is why this is the first thing I am contributing. I think this was about right. (Only problem is, I'm not 100% on where things go from here. I think I might make the request to see you do either, or of the continuations from here, or even to have you do the anal route now that I'm satisfied with this route going off and now I want to see what your idea of Asha's natural reaction is.) Jemini (talk) 23:51, 12 January 2019 (CET)