Talk:Public Nudity / Beach / Brutus Can Go Last
It's time to go into denouement. Y'all get to decide how much trouble the boys are are in. (Hint, JayJay's Dad in more interested in protecting his family than punishing anyone. The cops feel otherwise. The Thomas option is more of a "happy" ending, depending on one's views on grooming.) -- Nondoody (talk) 00:40, 2 January 2020 (UTC)
I'm not a huge fan of anal. It would have been more enjoyable for me if he'd been in her pussy. Meh! Oh well, on with the show! I chose Jay Jay's dad as a middle ground, but I'm kinda curious about the "happy" ending with Thomas, too. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:25, 2 January 2020 (UTC)
- Yeah...I went back and fourth on the anal bestiality thing, but I decided that, visually, the "knotted/tied to the dog" part of the story was the super important and that could not have happened with vaginal sex. No matter what your pornos tell you, the pelvic bone structure/musculature of a human female is not rigid enough to make a true vaginal tie happen. I could have hand-waved that (a lot of authors do) but I am kinda a stickler for the medicine/anatomy. As to the endings...I can write both. -- Nondoody (talk) 02:03, 2 January 2020 (UTC)
If this is the very last branch then I'm curious how they all end. But JayJay's dad should definitely punish the hussy that has sullied his beach house. Villenia (talk) 07:23, 2 January 2020 (UTC)