Revision as of 11:41, 8 March 2020 by Telgar(talk | contribs)(Created page with "Great addition, just made a few minor adjustments. Made the part where Jake says "Crap" it's own paragraph as well as his mother's reply. Also ease try and use italics when a...")
Great addition, just made a few minor adjustments. Made the part where Jake says "Crap" it's own paragraph as well as his mother's reply. Also ease try and use italics when a character is thinking.
Telgar (talk) 04:41, 8 March 2020 (PST)