Talk:Vault 69/Meeting/End

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I was actually planning to create three or more nexus points from the end of the meeting, and go forward with one of them. That is really what killed my ambition for the story back when I stopped. I was going to pick it back up during the quarantine (once I saw the remaining interest) . . . and still will. I guess I'll try to make this branch fit in one of the nexus points, and Telgar can go from there . . . once I have gathered my thoughts, that is. For now, by all means, Telgar, continue on . . . but I may need to do a bit of alteration in the near future if you don't mind. --Elerneron (talk) 21:46, 25 March 2020 (CET)


NP, I actually got inspired by the conversation, do what you gotta do. I expected it to get altered. Especially since I suck at making speech sound like ten year old boy. But after reading the intro and talks, my mind just wouldn't stop, so I wrote what I felt was the next logical step. Sadly my inspiration comes and goes in spurts. --Telgar (talk) 22:36, 25 March 2020 (CET)


I have that problem too, which is why many of my characters (Tay included) are precocious; and have speech patterns, vocabulary, and diction well beyond their years. --Elerneron (talk) 22:50, 25 March 2020 (CET)


Looking at what you added, I think mine would fit well under choice 2, but could be altered to be choice 3. I basically saw Tay at the top. With Department Head's/Wives under him, each on charge of their area. If new Department became needed (IT for example) then a new head/wife would be created. Just a thought, not sure which path you wanted.

I think choice 1 would be the hardest to write and make believable, considering Tay would still be in charge no matter what. --Telgar (talk) 23:00, 25 March 2020 (CET)

Yeah, trying out a democracy in that kind of situation is begging for failure. Actually, a real democracy is a horrible idea, because most people are idiots with absolutely no clue what is actually best for them. That is why we have a representative democracy . . . which has its own flaws. --Elerneron (talk) 23:59, 25 March 2020 (CET)