Talk:Step daughters/Do-good-Mom/first Monday

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Hmm, going by the wording of that set of choices especially, I think you REALLY need to work on your clarity as well as your impact-to-word ratio. (FYI: Impact to word ratio is a bit of a professional term among writers. It means you try to chose your words carefully so you have shorter sentences but more weight and impact behind them. Essentially, stuffing meaning and importance into every single word you choose if at all possible.) Jemini (talk) 07:54, 2 August 2020 (CEST)

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