Talk:Ecstasy Island/The Kensington Family/7

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Feedback: I like it! Pacing is good, maybe a little rushed at times, but overall decent. Not sure where it should go. Is his appearance going to change to better match his self image or change him however he wants to make it easier to lay his dad? Because given where they are it would make the most sense for him to be disguised as another villager. Whether you wanted to go full blown hermaphrodite or good old sissy boy is up to you! --Villenia (talk) 22:30, 4 January 2022 (CET)

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