Talk:A Loli's ENF Adventure/Sally/Week2/Sleepover

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I've been working on this page for a while, off and on, and fair warning: there's not much action. But I laid some groundwork for things to come, and introduced a bunch of characters. That last part is the main reason it took so long, making up interesting characters and describing them in a way that flows naturally isn't something I have too much practice with. But anyway, I finally got this branch started, hopefully it will lead to some fun. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 06:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)

So I had been sitting on a draft of the games option for way too long and wasn't really happy with it so I don't mind that someone else jumped on it, but in case it's interesting or useful, here's some background I invented for the characters, including a couple secrets which weren't revealed yet. Of course other authors are free to ignore all this, but for my own purposes I needed some rough outlines of personality and motivation.

Julia Potts – 28 Mother of Elly and Billy; Hippy, Poly
Darryl Potts – 31 Father of Elly and Billy; Poly, Nice but not very responsible
Vivian "Potts" – 19 Darryl's secret lover, Sexpot, Childish
Elenore (Elly) Potts – 11 Friend of Sally. Busty for her age, Flirty
William (Billy) Potts – 8 Outgoing for his age. No real sex drive, but curious about everything, girls included
Rick – 10 Friend of Billy, Shy, but has a crush on Sally
Chelsea – 11 Girly girl, Secretly a pervert
Traci – 10 Sporty, Assertive
Silvia – 11 Rich, Kinda mean

So yeah, the big one is that the rumors about the family being unconventional are true, and Vivian isn't really Darryl's cousin. Whether the kids ever figure that out (or if Elly already knows) is up in the air, but as far as family dynamics... well Vivian is far from a responsible adult. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 09:58, 26 February 2022 (CET)

I tried to follow this to some extent in case you wanted to jump back in at any point to explore your idea, but stayed intentionally ambiguous so that there are more options. Not sold on the ages. Vivian could easily be younger - high school dropout would fit - and there's no reason she couldn't be a cousin and a secret lover. ;D I'd also rather Billy be older, but to each their own! Maybe Traci had to bring her younger brother with her and he joined the older boys' sleepover. --Villenia (talk) 01:24, 3 March 2022 (CET)

I could definitely see Viv being underage (and still Darryl's secret lover) as and even more scandalous option. Maybe she's a runaway he picked up on the road? But anyway, don't worry about it. You're the one who actually got around to finishing pages here, so write what you like. I really just put this up to save you (or others) having to invent details for that many characters at once if you didn't want to. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 06:52, 6 March 2022 (CET)