Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 21st, 2021/Caught Off Guard/Heidi's Afternoon

well shit is finally happening and man your are teasing me now but hell im so excited for this man ic ant wait to see whta you do

btw i have read all the other stuff you been doing i like some of the changes but i gonna be brutally honest with you about one specifically i feel like they were unnecessary like the whole part of emilia and letting the mom choose the black mark putting that extra part feels like it cheapens the work i mean as a reader i dont like when the character that is supposed to be on a pressure moemnt drops huge exposition for no reason other to make the reader understand whats happening or to remember old things it feels like as a reader i forgotten the rules somehow. i like the how it was before not gonna lie adding the option to refuse is fine and i like it becuase is more options is the last part of the changes on that page that i feel is not great it definitely feels like extra stuff that wasn't necessary. but thats just5 my opinion if villenia and you likes it i wont complain.  	--Xephion (talk) 13:49, 28 December 2022 (CET)