Talk:The Last Horcrux/Investigate Pensieve

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Emily finding her mothers Pensieve gives her the opportunity to find out a lot more plot, such as what really happened to her parents, but it also allows me to write more deviant sex scenes from Sofia’s memory, as well as that of Bellatrix, Rabastan and Radolphus.

This means I can write some Mf and Mg and Mg+ sex scenes as well as the gg and fg and ff that make up most of this story.

Ideas I have so far:

Sofia’s memories of lesbian sex at Hogwarts (gg and gg+)

Sofia’s memories of magical sex rituals

Sofia insisting that Bellatrix let Sofia’s husband Rabastan fuck her.

Sofia giving herself to Bellatrix husband Radolphus in exchange

Both of above scenes from the men’s perspectives

Initiating a young virgin into the cult (mg and fg and m+g and f+g) male perspective

Punishing a young Slytherin girl (bondage, mmmmmg) several perspectives, maybe the girls too

Do any of you have any requests of particular sex scenes you would like me to write? Obvious I prefer the fg and gg stuff but I can write mg etc no problem

Emily will have the Pensieve in her inventory from now on, so she can easily go back and view it whenever she likes. This means there will be a link to it on every page. This means yiu can make suggestions and I can write them whenever I feel like it.

Emily (talk) 21:34, 13 February 2023 (UTC)

Please put suggestions below:


Personally, I'm biased in favor of a female perspective, so that's where my requests and ideas go. Can't say I'm too picky about the pairings or who's in control, so all's fine by me. Also, I remember you asking for feedback on the sex scenes on another page before the site went momentarily kaput, so if you don't mind, I'll also put that here.

The sex scenes have been fun and enjoyable reads, but since most of it has been in Emily's head (and now memories too, I guess), it feels like there are very few "stakes" involved, no changes to how the characters feel about each other et cetera. So in that sense, if I had to request something, I would vouch for Emily to get to Hogwarts as soon as possible to actually get in with the action personally. 😊 I remember reading about some of your ideas about her discovering a young couple having sex, for example, and it should honestly be fun! -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 23:04, 14 February 2023 (UTC)

  • Thanks for the feedback. Emily will be be getting to Hogwarts after just a couple more scenes, and when she does she will of course meet all the girls there, aged 11-18. This will provide plenty of opportunity for actual girl-girl sex, rather than just her masturbating and fantasising endlessly (unless you already chose the Bellatrix sex path). There will be some risks for her in terms of relationships, and obviously most of the girls will be straight, so she might have to employ some tricks to get what she wants. I’m hoping that Emily’s masturbation builds some tension to some extent, and also, being a lesbian surrounded by mostly straight girls does that anyway, with fantasy and masturbation being the only outlet for a lot of young lesbians especially. When Emily gets to Hogwarts the sex side of the story will really get going Emily (talk) 00:28, 15 February 2023 (UTC)